Monday, October 12, 2009

Sentence 10

His Sentence:
But what do we know there's a good chance that there's a female on board, Ro thought grimly, remembering the attack on Macet.

From Star Trek Deep Space Nine Unity by, S.D. Perry

A complex sentence is created by the combination of a subordinate clause, an appositive, and a participial phrase. Used to add some intensity to the scene.

My Sentence:

How is a war to be ended in peace, he thought suddenly, knowing about past wars.

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