Monday, October 5, 2009

Sentence 4

His sentence:

At some point, either Kira or Nog had told him that Yevir Linjarin had actually served on the station as one of the Militia Crew, and that he'd had some kind of vision after meeting Jake's father a few years ago.

From: Star Trck Deep Space Nine Unity, By S.D. Perry

A prepositional phase is used at the beginning is used to show that the character does not know when something happend. The sentence is also a compound sentence combing two sentences about a dream someone had.

My Sentence:

Before the game, either Sam or Bill will tell Kate about the problem, and that they had build her a new desk.

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